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So far, I have 6,629 words of Chapter twenty, where very intense and interesting things happen. Here's a peek:




"You've put the carton of milk on the porch?" Jacob stared intently at Quil, his hand straying to play with the frayed edges of the cushion.

"Every night before I go to bed, just like you asked me, man." Quil smiled warmly, his gaze straying down to the legs of the sofa where a small, pale hand peeked from the shadows.

"Good. Hope Embry has done the same." Jake stretched his long legs, unmindful of the thin fingers that greedily reached towards him.






Date: 2012-12-03 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vanashta.livejournal.com
Oh,I get it!!!Jake's trying to score points with Sinterklaas,by offering the old man a glas of milk (to get a nice present!);DDD
If he puts a carrot (for the horse)on the porch as well,I'm sure it'll work!!!;DDDD


Aliens under the sofa,perhaps?:)

Date: 2012-12-04 12:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] herumtreiber.livejournal.com
If Sinterklaas has any sense, Jake doesn't need the milk to get presents. Unless it's the other Sinterklaas and it goes after her :DDD

The carrot might work ;DDD

The scary thing is that it makes perfect sense, you will see :DDD
Edited Date: 2012-12-04 12:18 am (UTC)

Date: 2012-12-04 01:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wirrrn.livejournal.com

the milk is for Bella, to trick her into staying until the sun rises and she turns to stone, right? :)

Date: 2012-12-04 03:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] herumtreiber.livejournal.com
Actually, when she goes to get it the trapdoor opens and she will fall into the floor below, filled with pointy, poisoned stakes :)

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