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I've written 2,808 words for the next chapter.
I tried to do what Meyer does so well, where everyone waxes enthusiastic about The BellaTM
I'm afraid it didn't work :(

Here's a snippet. Warning for coarse language.

I glared at Edward. "You were really mad."

He shrugged guiltily. "You hurt my Singer, Jacob. I was still under her thrall."

I sipped the cola and then lowered the can, pressing its coldness against my bicep while I nodded, accepting his apology. "I understand, Edward. I  went berserk when Paul phased and threatened her."

Emmett snorted and gazed sideways at us, glaring at a point between Ed and me. "You two were deluded fools, pining for that bitch. Paul should've snapped her bony ass in half."

The powers of The BellaTM may seem awesome, but I have prepared something for her, carefully hinted at here.

Date: 2012-12-12 12:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vanashta.livejournal.com

Can I smack Ed on the head,please????

Seems Emmett is the only one that sees things as they are!!!And he's right ,Paul should have!!!
Only yesterday I was thinking about all those missed chances myself,James,Laurent,Paul,oh and lets not forget Jasper and the Volturi!!!!!Such a shame.......:(((

Well,it seems the new chapt will make up for that!!!!!!*rubs hands*;DDDDD

Date: 2012-12-12 01:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] herumtreiber.livejournal.com
You're welcome!! ;DDD

Please, be my guest. He needs smacking!! ;DDDD

Emmett is a reasonable guy and he might get impatient with these two! :DDD
The thing with Paul is that Bella should have realized that slapping a guy has consequences, no matter if he is a werewolf or not, but of course she never has to suffer for it!! :(((
Riley! The poor guy was at Victoria's beck and call. The difference is that Victoria wasn't the cold fish that dear Bellikins is.
The one that come closer to doing away with the hoer is Rennee-is-meh or whatever the hell Chucky's name is!! :DDD

Bella is going to get it from the Eastern Front, the Western Front, the North and South. A multiple fanfic attack!! ;DDD

There has to be some buildup before she gets it, though.
*cackles while petting white dog*

Edited Date: 2012-12-12 01:19 am (UTC)

Date: 2012-12-12 07:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wirrrn.livejournal.com

Half's not sure enough. Snap her into fragments :)

Date: 2012-12-12 01:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] herumtreiber.livejournal.com
She and Chucky will get it in another short story. :)

I'm not pleased with Renesmee "Truculent sweet cheeks" Cullen who repeatedly bites Jake in BD2!

Date: 2012-12-12 04:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wirrrn.livejournal.com
I'm still amazed at how little screentime Lautner got. They...do realize he's one of the three stars, right? Aro made it worth watching though- especially his mad cackle at meeting the brat :)

Date: 2012-12-12 04:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] herumtreiber.livejournal.com
It was the end of the saga, so they don't need to keep up the suspense by showing him. I guess the main reason is the imprint. Meyer's stupid, pseudo-romantic and lazy plot device may look palatable on print. It certainly doesn't on film.

If they had shown more Jacob onscreen, they would have to shown Renesmee too. That might be awful.
Of course there are ways to circumvent that, but since screenwriters had to work with the material at hand, they didn't explore possibilities.

Also, it is the apotheosis of super!mother bitch and Robsten, where Rob turns into sten's lap dog. So most of the screen time goes to them.


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