Twilight drabble: The last kiss

[herumtreiber]

Title: The last kiss
Author: herumtreiber 
Rating: PG
Characters: Jacob/Edward
Word count: 100
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I do not own Twilight, Stephenie Meyer does. I don't make money from this writing.
Summary: Edward's last kiss before the wedding.

My lips touch soft ones, trying to prolong the moment. This will be the last kiss we'll ever share. I look at those dark eyes I used to love so much, eyes that first looked at me with skepticism and later with love.

My fingers caress those smooth, sculpted cheeks, tracing a path to the silky dark hair I've played with so many times. I try to dismiss the raging thoughts of jealousy that fill Jake's mind.

Nodding solemnly, I rush to say the words that will forever break a heart.

"Bella, it's Jacob I love. I'm so, so sorry."

Comments

[acaranna.livejournal.com]

Heartachingly beautiful.

And at first one could think it's Jacob that Edward says Good-Bye to. I'm glad that it's Bella though.

Lovely work. :)

[jeri-1116.livejournal.com]

Heartbreaking. I thought for sure it was Jake he was talking too. Nicely done.

[walkonwaterbabe.livejournal.com]

nice twist ending

[wirrrn.livejournal.com]

Awesome. Evil and awesome. Went in a completely different direction from where I thought it was heading. Loooooove it!

[lovemochi.livejournal.com]

The ending made me smile.

[fairygodmother9.livejournal.com]

How a few sentences can tell an entire story! Lovely