Oh, you're back with more of my fave supernatural pairing. YAY!!!!!
I'm really enjoying this, I like how throughout this chapter Jake's concerns kinda shift from Bella to Edward. So Alice found him huh and brought him back? Can't wait to see how it turns out, that last part threw me.
I like that Bella's dead, I always felt that's how the series should have ended. Even if Nessie lived, I think Bella still should've died, she got everything she wanted, by being selfish, there should have been some consequences.
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Date: 2012-04-13 03:47 pm (UTC)I'm really enjoying this, I like how throughout this chapter Jake's concerns kinda shift from Bella to Edward. So Alice found him huh and brought him back? Can't wait to see how it turns out, that last part threw me.
I like that Bella's dead, I always felt that's how the series should have ended. Even if Nessie lived, I think Bella still should've died, she got everything she wanted, by being selfish, there should have been some consequences.
Great start, can't wait for more.