Haiku: Passion blooms

[herumtreiber]

Title: Passion blooms
Author: herumtreiber 
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Edward/Jacob
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I do not own Twilight, Stephenie Meyer does. Nor do I make any money from writing the haiku.

Spring twig gently sways,
twists like the lovers beneath,
limbs white and russet.

Comments

[lolblack.livejournal.com]

Usually I'm not a fan of haiku because they are not sufficiently described. But that's downright addictive! Another.

[wirrrn.livejournal.com]

Awesome. Another sweet one! Lovely visuals too!

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Working on the next :)

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Sorry there was no Bella, she was on the limb watching them, and it might fall off any minute :)

[wirrrn.livejournal.com]

I'd also accept her being hit by the tree :)

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

She's going to fall off the branch, and then get hit by the falling tree :)

[wirrrn.livejournal.com]

Then a nest of killer bees fall on her :)

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

But not before she's bitten by the asp that was on the crotch :)

[walkonwaterbabe.livejournal.com]

haa funny, Bella needs to die, so that Edward/Jacob can be together

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

Don't worry, the asp, the killer bees or the tree will be effective.

Or maybe the piano dangling from atop the tallest tree :DD

[hogwartsvixxxen.livejournal.com]

again very visual and pretty.

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

Thank you! ♥ ♥

I'm working on the drabble :)

[hogwartsvixxxen.livejournal.com]

YAY! Thank You!

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

The wolf hunted

:)))

*hugs*

[hogwartsvixxxen.livejournal.com]

OOOHHH I just know he did.





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