Ghost road progress report

[herumtreiber]

I've finished chapter five. Now I've got to polish it. It was pretty intense and draining, but very satisfying.

4602 / 4602
(100%)

Here's the beginning:

I sucked the stale blood of the dead animal, which tasted awful. I refused to let it go to waste and anger Jacob. It wasn't that I was scared of him, far from it. I was afraid for him. I didn't want Jake to provoke me. I didn't want to throw him against a tree. It had hurt me to see his broken body slink down to the floor and know I was the cause of his pain. More than Jacob realized; more than I had thought possible.

Comments

[jeri-1116.livejournal.com]

Wait, does this mean this story is almost over? I hope not, because it feels like it just got started. :(

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

No, the story is not over. There's a shift because the POV is Edward's. We'll get to see what he's been up to, beyond grieving :)

[vanashta.livejournal.com]

Interesting,I always thought there was a lack of bloodsucking on the Cullens side,but Edward should try fresh human blood for a change!Would do him good!
And I really hope he'll make up to Jake soon for hurting him!
Can't wait to read this new chapter!

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

Yes, Edward should try. He'd feel awfully guilty though, unless... :)

Don't worry. Edward feels really, really guilty for what he did. You'll see *vbg*

Thanks! I'm working on the last touches.