Haiku: First Beach at midnight

[herumtreiber]

Title: First Beach at midnight
Author: herumtreiber 
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Haiku
Characters: Edward/Jacob
Warnings:  None
Disclaimer: Stephenie Meyer owns Twilight, not me. This is for fun, not profit.

plowing inside you,
draped in silver, you're open; 
the moon anoints you.

Comments

[vanashta.livejournal.com]

"...;the moon anoints you"

Just Perfect!

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I came up with the anointing part at the last minute :)

[wirrrn.livejournal.com]

Ace!

"Bella drowns offshore" is the unspoken final line, too :)

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

Bella is snorkeling, trying to find out what the guys are up to, she gulps water and drowns, sinking to the ocean floor like a sack of wet potatoes :)