Haiku: The magic of the second moon

[herumtreiber]

Title:  The magic of the second moon
Author:herumtreiber 
Characters: Draco/Harry
Genre: Haiku
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None.
Disclaimer:  JK Rowling owns them, not me. This is for mischief's sake, not profit.
Notes: For poetic_hp 's prompt #48: moon.

blond hair lures him on,
chased inside silver cauldrons,
the blue moon brews clouds.

Comments

[hogwartsvixxxen.livejournal.com]

You know I love anything to do with the moon. Beautiful. ♥ *hugs* :)

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

I know you love the moon. I'm glad you enjoyed it :) ♥ *hugs*

[hogwartsvixxxen.livejournal.com]

♥ *hugs* :)

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

♥ *hugs back* :)

[intimisky.livejournal.com]

No sé cómo lo haces, pero logras vez tras vez que el sentido nazca y se encuentre con nuevas imágenes, nuevas emociones, el mismo amor...
Diecisiete sílabas para contar una historia, qué arte.

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

Estuve cambiando algunas palabras y se me ocurrió el símil de los calderos plateados como nubes. Es un reto apegarse al límite de las 17 sílabas, pero vale la pena.

¡Muchas gracias por tu amable comentario!

[vanashta.livejournal.com]

Lovely,but you know I love your haikus!;)

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad you like them :) I should do a twi one :)

[vanashta.livejournal.com]

You always should:))

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

Let's say it has to do with this icon :)

[lijahlover.livejournal.com]

I love Draco's hair and the lovely moon :)

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

Thank you! His hair glimmers in the moonlight :)