Haiku: The songs of the forest

[herumtreiber]

Title: The songs of the forest
Author: herumtreiber 
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Jacob/Edward
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I do not own Twilight, Stephenie Meyer does. Nor do I make any money from writing the haiku.



Crunching summer leaves,
Edward hears his wolf approach,
melody of paws.

Comments

[wirrrn.livejournal.com]

Awww. Sweet and lovely imagery. You can leave "Bella's head explodes" till next time ;)

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

Isn't it strange how violent imagery fits so well picturing Bella's demise?

I wonder why :)

Thanks!

[hogwartsvixxxen.livejournal.com]

Beautiful just beautiful and the imagery

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

Thank you! ♥

I love wolf!Jake. I know its CGI and all, but I just do :)

[hogwartsvixxxen.livejournal.com]

Oh I do too. I just want to ruffle that fur

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

And the eyes. My favorite moment in New Moon is when the wolf first appears, and Bella sees her reflection in the wolf's eyes. Very poignant.

And what does Bella do? She goes... duh? :)

[hogwartsvixxxen.livejournal.com]

It was. I would have been in awe like OMG and reached out to touch the wolf.

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

To me it spoke of the essential humanity of the wolf. I was in Jake's team since then - although not with Bella :))

[hogwartsvixxxen.livejournal.com]

So beautifully put I go more for Jake than Edward though I do like JakEward. Nice Icon *winks*

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

*winks back*

I like them both, but I find it easier to write Edward.

[lefearieesprit.livejournal.com]

Love all the things you write!

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much!! ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥