Ballad: Recollections past and present

[herumtreiber]

Title: Recollections past and present
Author: herumtreiber
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Poetry, ballad
Characters: Harry/Draco
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: Harry Potter and the rest belong to JK Rowling, I only play with them.
Notes: Response to poetic_hp 's July prompt: lazy summer days

 

 

Looking into the black Pensieve
I watched a tousled-haired boy;
the mirror held your reflection
that would become my joy.

The smell of Quidditch leather gloves,
Weasley relayed the plays;
like graceful birds of prey we flew
those lazy summer days.

 

Resonant timbre of your spells,
I’m yours till my last breath;
your voice holds immortality,
I’ve had enough of death.

 
Wrestling with everyday disdain,
my love lies in your palm;
tentative caress of your hand
soothes like a healing balm.

 
Sweatdrops stud our coupled bodies,
in the night our souls merge;
velvet sky shelters our children,
past and future converge.

Comments

[hogwartsvixxxen.livejournal.com]

One word one comment

Stunning

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

Thank you!! ♥ ♥

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[intimisky.livejournal.com]

So beautiful and well written... I love the rhythm and the events that you just put in this ballad to give us a gorgeous love story...

Congrats!

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

Thank you! ♥ ♥

It started with the Pensieve and Draco's recollections of his times with Harry. And the story goes on...

matta ne,

ht

[sabinefrappe.livejournal.com]

Wow. Truly stunning. I end up writing funny shit most of the time, so I love the more serious beauty in what you write. Hey, leave me a good prompt some time and I'll write a fun verse just for you, k?

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I always enjoy reading your comments.

Now for the prompt:

midnight truce

*rubs hands a la Mr. Burns* :))

[enchanted-jae.livejournal.com]

Wow, gorgeous!

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

Thank you! ♥ ♥

[lijahlover.livejournal.com]

Ohhh just beautiful

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

Thank you! ♥ ♥

[moonlitdark.livejournal.com]

Beautiful! :))

[herumtreiber.livejournal.com]

Thank you!! ♥ ♥